oh dear this is pretty much incomprehensible
Written By: Doktor Habit
September 14, 2018
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Okay, so, I heard this song, and it just made me think of you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFqr-TWgeZc
Alec Benjamin's "Outrunning Karma"
This fit the prompt so well!!! Your formatting really enhanced this poem and it was so creative how you made Karma the narrator. I like how through the formatting you could show how the person was "falling apart at the seams." I also really like how simple this is and you never truly say what this person did, but left it to the reader's imagination. But, you could still tell how hurt the person was. The last line really wrapped this poem up well.
Great job and keep writing! This was amazing:)
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