Doktor Habit

United States

Message to Readers

oh dear this is pretty much incomprehensible

Karma

September 14, 2018

    
such horrible
horrible things

                            i find it
                    disgusting
        how you
take
                    PRIDE
in what

        you'    
                ve
                        d
                            o
                                n
                                    e

he's 
                        f
                    a
                        l
                            l
                                    i
                                            n
                                                g
                                                            a
                                                            p    
                                                        a
                                                                r
                                                        t
                                            at
                                                        the
                                    seams.


                                            he cried
                                for Karma    
                                                            to 
                                                                    R
                                                                        I
                                                                           p
    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​                            Y
​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    ​    O
                                                                                            U
                                                                                                     to
                                                                              P
                                                                                I
                                                                                   E
                                                                                  C
                                                                                E
                                                                              S                        
                                    and so
                                                            here
                                                                i
                                                               am    

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3 Comments
  • SomeFormOfWriting

    Okay, so, I heard this song, and it just made me think of you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFqr-TWgeZc

    Alec Benjamin's "Outrunning Karma"


    about 2 years ago
  • Luna Lemon

    This fit the prompt so well!!! Your formatting really enhanced this poem and it was so creative how you made Karma the narrator. I like how through the formatting you could show how the person was "falling apart at the seams." I also really like how simple this is and you never truly say what this person did, but left it to the reader's imagination. But, you could still tell how hurt the person was. The last line really wrapped this poem up well.
    Great job and keep writing! This was amazing:)


    about 2 years ago
  • LackingASocialLife

    Love this


    about 2 years ago