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I love the imagery! If you know me at all (which...may be hard on a website ;) ), I'm all about making sure that the reader can feel/taste/see/experience each scene that is written. And you create some lovely pictures! :) Great work!
Why is this person in a cabin up cabin? And I'd love to know more about the haven, and the time of appointment. Poem sequels are sometimes fun to write. ;)
Great job! Keep up the good work, and God bless! :)