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Great hook sentence, because it summarized the film in one sentence. It drew me in, and made me want to read more
The ability to write about the movie and make it seem interesting without giving away any main events or spoilers
yes, it had just the right amount of detail and information in each paragraph
Great job, keep up the good work and look out for the small grammar mistakes.
Maybe add some more info on the robbers and what actors played them. Give one or two examples of what happened to Kevin that made him a stronger person and caused him to be a dynamic character