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The review's detailed survey of the film's merits and argument for its superiority to many modern films were immediately interesting. The first lines could be made even more compelling by varying sentence length to a greater extent.
I found the writer's clear, discerning analysis of the film to be the most convincing. The writer displayed a keen understanding of and appreciation for the film that was quite persuasive.
The writer has provided more than sufficient examples and evidence from the film to support his ideas; I was left with no lingering questions or feeling of need for more details.
This draft of the review is already well-developed and sophisticated. Everything is already excellent in terms of content and structure, the only thing left to do is make a few small changes with regard to word choice and mechanics.
The film review is well titled;it provides a preview of the writer's main argument that will draw readers in before they even begin to read.