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The simpleness of it. 'to make a kid like me smile.' The imagery in this is also great, and the format makes you want to read it from top to bottom multiple times. :) To me, the shorter the poem, the more readable, and you did a great job!
You really did a great job...I can relate well to this. 'devouring books hungrily / adding new words to my repertoire.' Really love these lines!
Great job! Please keep writing! This is relatable to many people, I'm sure. Books can be our lifeline. :)