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Hallucination

By: Nonny21


FREE WRITING

"Don't go. I'm scared."
"Why? What's wrong?"
"I'm scared to be alone. If you go I'll start hallucinating again. Alex, please don't go."
"Don't worry. I'll stay with you."
"..."
"MOM! She's hallucinating again. She thinks she's talking to Alex."
"NO"
 


Peer Review

The play on the though and leaving an open picture for imagination.


Was Alex a lover or a sibling?


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