I'm just a girl who loves playing with words :)
I've got my nose in a book and ink stains on my fingers and numbers in my head.
Written By: Nonny21
September 10, 2018
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Wow... just... wow. This is incredible. The amount of layers this piece has for how short it is is phenomenal. The last few sentences hit me right in the gut and tied in perfectly with the beginning. That fact that this is just 40 words but tells such a complete and heartbreaking story is sooooo amazing. GREAT JOB and keep writing!!!:)
The last two lines though...hit me hard:() what a great piece...it was short and simple but the choice of words and how you used them made it really powerful.
I very much liked it :=)
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