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Message to Readers
Is this random? Yes. Does it make sense? I hope so. Should I have published this? Probably not. Is it worth your time? Not really sure.
Look, all I know is I had an idea and this is where it went so... I hope you enjoy.
All likes and comments are appreciated.
The dying on laughter, I mean, people say it all the time, it just flies over people's heads.
I think this could easily be part of a bigger story, but also a story by itself.
I liked this story alot, you can actually write a short story, that alone is worth aplause.