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Yea... the Oxford comma annoys me
Well, to start, I actually had to look up what an oxford comma was (I had no idea lol). I didn't know that it was stylistic thing; I had been taught that it was always necessary. Your slightly satirical tone made it enjoyable to read, and I was pleasantly surprised with how much you were able to fit into six stanzas.
What prompted this poem? Was it a specific instance, or a long buildup of frustration? I think a more in depth description on the effect it has on people would be a bit more engaging, but other than that this piece is pretty spot-on.
I'm sorry this took so long! I read it a few days ago but didn't have time to write the review. Thank you for being patient. I'm usually not a huge fan of poetry, but this was an entertaining read. Your word choice was very clever.
I'm looking forward to reading some of your other pieces!