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Definitely the last sentence, "He imagined himself blurring into the scene, like it was a watercolour, and that pleased him because if he was in a watercolour he wouldn’t have to go home."
A sense of loneliness but I got more of an emotion of thought, and of pondering about life and himself.
I really, really like this! I like how you portrayed the scene and the character, even in just one paragraph. I really like your character choice on name(Slate)!
Overall, this is a great piece!!!