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The hinting at what happened. The nostalgia in it. I've written a few pieces like this, and they're always so touching. The reader yearns to know more, and even though often times he can't, the knowledge that you know at least somewhat what happened totally rips your heart apart, and you're left with sadness. It also totally draws the reader in. :)
This is beautiful the way it is written! There's always room to use this for a short story, but I love it as is. :)
I had to write a review. This is such a touching piece! Fantastically written! *crying* So beautiful and sad.
Keep up the good work! God bless! :)