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I really enjoyed that it wasn't just a piece about love being there for everyone. In the end, instead of having the cheesy, expected ending, it takes an approach on realistic endings, but is still true to love's meaning.
I really want to know what happened to the blonde and redhead boys. A follow up about their relationship could possibly reveal more about love. Also, I would like to know about Seamus the dog.
This was a wonderful piece that I really enjoyed reading and reviewing. I don't exactly have anything negative to say, so...good job!