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The Car Is Silent

August 31, 2018

The car is silent.

The endless turning of the wheels,
To the gentle chatter of the engine,
Silence of the mouths,

The rain patters lightly,
Our thoughts can't wash away,
We hold our tongues,

The car is silent.

We hope and pray and wonder,
We wish we truly knew,
The rain heavily patters,

The car slowly rolls,
Everything is still,
Our thoughts race on, 

The car is silent. 


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