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Grace Croken

United States

You can't breathe - so you write

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Thanks for reading ;) feedback appreciated

Remembrance

August 24, 2018

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I remember you,
I remember you from long ago.
From another time.
From a hazy dream.
Do you remember?
Do you remember our melody?
Close your eyes,
And take my hand,
And sing with me,
The song that I know you remember. 

 

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2 Comments
  • Grace Croken

    thank you :)


    4 months ago
  • rainandsonder

    I love the use of repetition here, and the building of a dreamlike, almost wistful tone, that really makes you feel like you're meeting someone you knew long ago.


    11 months ago