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Message to Readers
I was scrolling through the website feed when I realized that everyone online was literally on the other side of the world. I should probably go to bed soon.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
The imagery! Goodness, some of the phrases you use are amazing! I love how it provides those certain feelings that only come with that time of day.
I think some of your ideas such as the silence of the world could be deepened by maybe expanding on why the world is so silent. Also, your use of the first person kinda changes the perspective and is a bit bumpy in terms of cohesion. Try to also broaden your vocabulary if possible because they add more interest to a piece, strengthening the overall message as well
Hiya! It's my first time doing a review so please excuse any mistakes!
Your piece is overall really good. When I read this piece, I knew exactly how you feel because I myself wake up five in the morning to do work sometimes! I'd say that when writing a piece like this again, provide even more imagery that involves more senses (sight, hearing, smell, taste and touch).
Please let me know if there is anything in particular you would like to know about your piece and I will try my best to help!
This is a fab piece and I hope that you keep writing!