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It's so short, but it has so much meaning! The narrator is clearly able to express their grief in 3 short sentences.
There's so much more to this story that we don't know. Who died? What happened to them? What was their connection to the narrator? The depparted is clearly dear to the narratior.
I feel like you could extend this poem into a longer poem about their relationship, and how one of them died. ^^