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I liked how you expressed your feelings towards your instruments and music as a key and necessary part of your life; I could really feel your passion. Also, I liked how you went into Spanish for part of it (even if my translation wasn't perfect).
This had fewer vignettes than the November and December pieces, T^T.
I can feel your thoughts, passion, and love just by reading this vignettes; I feel like I've gotten to know you better through reading these. This was a review of the MyFormOfWriting Competition way back when, sorry it took me so long to review!