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I feel like I could really relate to these vignettes, especially the ones about music and exercise.
Nothing else, really, since it's a vignette. I'm wondering, however, if it's difficult to compress all your thoughts into only 100 words?
Vignettes are amazing. Throughout ever single one, you keep a consistent tone throughout; a tone fitting to the subject. This was a review of the MyFormOfWriting Competition way back when, sorry it took me so long to review!