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Your word choice was always on point and you manage to say so much in only 100 words. Incredible.
Since these are vignettes, I feel like there isn't really much more to ask for. Maybe more of how you were feeling during some of these events?
I love vignettes. You have such amazing control over your words and sentence structure. Truly stunning. This was a review of the MyFormOfWriting Competition way back when, sorry it took me so long to review!