Riley Noel

United States

Senior Peer Reviewer
Former Write the World young writer, now mentoring other WtW young writers through peer reviews!
I am so excited to help other young writers better their craft!!

Message from Writer

Adventurer
Daydreamer
Future Screen Writer
NCIS Agent
Rebel Spy
Demon Hunter
Possible Demigod
Shadowhunter
Starfleet Commander
A proud Gryffindor
Dean and Sam Winchester (older brothers)
In love with
Bucky Barnes
Indiana Jones
The Doctor
√Čomer
Doctor MCcoy

Not Used To

September 4, 2018

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Theres a girl sitting alone on a bench. 
Her brown eyes fixed on a place,
only she can see. 
if you want, 
you can walk up to her and say hi.
She'll smile and say hi.
You can sit down,
she won't mind. 
If you start a conversation,
she'll only give short answers,
with a smile and a laugh.
You might have to do most of the talking at first.
She'll talk more eventually,
shes ust not used to people listning.
She won't tell you this, 
because shes afraid you won't care but,
she loves the sky. 
She loves old books,
and ancient Gods, 
she loves lack holes,
and silly poems,
anything with meaning. 
If you bring any of these up, 
her eyes will start to sparkle 
adn she'll speak faster. If she starts to hesitate ,
encourage her to tell you more.
Shes so smart,
but no one ever listnes very long.
When you have to leave,
she'll smile and wave.
And even though she won't sa it,
you've made her day. 
If you do come back to see her
don't be surprissed at the surpire on her face,
she's not used to people coming back.

 

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