Peer Review by niyathij (United States)

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By: Mona Ster


His wickedness came from his sweet, poisonous lies. 

Peer Review

It is just one sentence that explains a lot.

Nope, This piece of flash fiction is enough to brew a story in one's mind.

Reviewer Comments

Maybe 2 more sentences would be great.