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PLEASE READ THIS REAL SLOW SO THAT EVERY LITTLE BIT SINKS INTO YOU PROPERLY. Wouldn't want you missing anything out. Enjoy!!! and feedback always appreciated:))
Just everything. It's so deep and the vocabulary is amazing and the way you put things like 'All sounds morph into blurred audio tapes, stringing into fragmented vibrations so low you can barely hear them' that make your mind go spinning.
Honestly, I think there could be less instead of more. Even though it's amazing, this kinds of repetition might get too monotonous for some people, so they get bored.