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PLEASE READ THIS REAL SLOW SO THAT EVERY LITTLE BIT SINKS INTO YOU PROPERLY. Wouldn't want you missing anything out. Enjoy!!! and feedback always appreciated:))
The first time I read this, I was so swayed by the imagery, flow, and spectacular vocabulary. Once I got to the footnotes, I was, for lack of better word, shook. The explanation gave this prose a whole new meaning- I had to reread this just to get a grasp of the depth of your words. This piece also delighted me because you requested I check out your work, saying you think I'm a good writer. To hear that someone who wrote * T H I S * thinks my meek little pieces are good? That's a massive compliment. I love your work- in my opinion, this is phenomenal compared to what I can write.
I'd like to know what inspired this writing. And also how many limbs you had to sell to buy such amazing writing talent. Seriously, this is disgracefully good. I'm a little jealous.
Hella proud of your work here and you should be too. I love the underlying meaning and I'm sorry my review is so brief. I've minimal-to-no ideas on how this could be any better- you're amazing!