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mrcolinredwards

United States

I am a huge fan of fantasy, science fiction, super heroes, cartoons, and musicals. My favorite color is red, I love elephants, and my favorite food is oyster crackers and Hershey's milk chocolate. I love writing creative stories. Please read my page!

Message to Readers

Here is my latest piece. Feel free to comment or review it.

I Really Miss You,A Message Poem To Kaitlyn

August 9, 2018

FREE WRITING

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Description: Hey guys...it's been a while since I've seen one of my favorite readers,Kaitlyn,and it honestly stinks that she's not around on this website anymore. She used to say such nice things about my stories,even getting into engaging conversations with me. It's hard to go one without someone like that around. So,I'm sending her this poem as a message,hoping she'll come back. 

Rated: K+ (just to keep it safe)

I remember when you became my friend

Saying nice things about my stories

Reveling in their glories

I thought it would never end

But,now it's like you've disappeared 

I don't know where you've gone

I'm without you now,the thing I always feared

How can I keep going on?

I never read many of your pieces,

But you had talent nevertheless 

With you not coming around

My loneliness increases

Everything's kind of a mess

I've got lots of friendly writers

But,having one not here makes me blue

I guess,Kaitlyn,what I'm trying to say is...

I really miss you

Without you around,up is down

Day is night

Having you not here is dull

Nothing feels right

I miss having you around

You make me soar 15 feet off the ground

It's been months and not one word

My thoughts of you are sort of blurred

I know this sounds kind of lame,

But without you here,it's not the same

I promise that every word I say is true

What I'm trying to say is....

I really miss you

Please come back

And talk to me

Your sweet comments are like a melody

I miss you so

I want you to know 

Without you here,

my sky's turned gray and black

Though we've never met

I'll never forget

The day we met online

You said nice things about my stories

That was oh so fine

This might sound desperate,but you become my friend

I don't want this thing to end

So,come on,Kaitlyn,wherever you are

Don't give up on me or wishing on that star

You're my friend,that much is true

I guess what I'm trying to say is...

I really miss you
Here is a special message for one of my readers. Kaitlyn,if you're seeing this,please read it and come back.

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5 Comments
  • Secret Rose

    Thank you so much mrcolinredwards, most probably I’ll be able to come back soon!
    Regards, Secret Rose


    10 months ago
  • mrcolinredwards

    Don't sweat it,Secret Rose,take all the time you need! I'm sure that this will pass and everything will turn out okay! I'll always have my other readers to help me through the day and should you find some time to be one this website! Take care,make good choices,and ,believe in magic,and follow your heart! Best wishes,mrcolinredwards!


    10 months ago
  • Secret Rose

    Yeah I did I’m so sorry!!


    10 months ago
  • mrcolinredwards

    Don't sweat it,I get a lot of tech glitches too! You can just click the refollow button and then it's all gucci! I don't hate you!


    10 months ago
  • Secret Rose

    Hello mrcolinredwards, sorry I accidentally pressed the unfollow button just now!!! I’m really, really sorry.. my IPad just suddenly went funny all of a sudden...and well, it happened...sorry!


    10 months ago