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mariemare

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asteroid belt

August 8, 2018

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you are breathtaking in everyway 
elegance in the way you fall
and a splendor unkempt 

seldom your cries as the sun does not leak
you must be joy repressed

my limit of knowledge could not go as far 
to describe the way, you fumble on your words 
when melting into the cement as you long for the stars
your smile so kind it begins to hurt

you’ve strengthened my jaw and set the lines by my eyes
and I’m forever grateful
for when you fell from the sky

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2 Comments
  • paperbird

    I kind of like to imagine the asteroid hurtling toward the dinosaurs when I read this poem.
    Lol it's really good :)


    7 months ago
  • Secret Rose

    Really creative! I will definitely feature this piece! Thank you so much for taking the time to respond to my idea abbie-!


    8 months ago