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Hey everyone, thank you so much for checking out my poem! I'd love to know what you think, I'm just looking for general feedback x
Every line stands out to me. I like how they rhyme and how they are presented differently through metaphors and sensory imagery.
I feel inspired to write my own piece, and to also try to bring out more emotion in my poems.
How long did it take you to bring your ideas out and put them into words?
Overall, I think this poem was written really well. :)