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nezi_nes

Hong Kong

Just keep swimming...in a sea of thoughts and ideas
Mostly INFJ
Do not love IB :(((((
Check out the link to my 4th blog (i.e the only one that works) https://writingsofthedeepblue.blogspot.com/

Hot air

August 5, 2018

PROMPT: Impermanence

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Stuffiness creeps in
Flames of air infiltrate walls
Ice cream sales explode

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8 Comments
  • nezi_nes

    @Nausicaa Ah thank you for thoughts on said title, it's helpful. Now how do I republish without losing all the likes.... Do you know if there a way to re-save it? If not well... if anyone else reads this the title is "Hot air".


    7 months ago
  • JadeAndSerpentine

    Great haiku. I think the title is a little too extravagant and unnecessary, though...


    7 months ago
  • nezi_nes

    You live in Australia? Cool how it's really hot here in the upper hemisphere while you guys are enjoying the cold right now..ahhh


    7 months ago
  • nezi_nes

    AnD hoW do yOu know, aggressivebackflip?


    7 months ago
  • LackingASocialLife

    Sounds like Australia.


    7 months ago
  • aggressivebackflip

    people are given three options: beer, ice, and sweat


    7 months ago
  • nezi_nes

    "Anytime, anywhere" you said


    8 months ago
  • omicron7889

    Dash vurry gud


    8 months ago