AlienFromPluto

United Kingdom

I write sometimes and like feedback.
That is all.
(:

Message from Writer

I hope you think of me
Still as your friend
I hope you love yourself
Your body and heart
I hope you feel happy
That's all I want

green -cavetown

Mannerisms

August 2, 2018

FREE WRITING

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"Sit up straight, shoulder's back!
Don't you see, what you lack?"

"Stop your slurping, sip your soup!
Must I repeat it, I'm stuck in a loop!"

"No coughing, no sneezing, no hiccups, no yawning!
Must I tell you each and every morning?"

"Explain the equation y = mx + c!
It's simple, use your brain, easy see?"

I'd like to see you try, 
be perfect, I mean.
I'd like to see you cry
Behind a porcelain mask.
I'd like to see you drown in a lie,
A big fat lie of life wrapped up in a ribbon.
I'd like to see you sigh,
When your really want to scream.
I'd like to see you move like a ballerina, high,
Each step on needles, each movement robotic.
But most of all,
I'd really love to 
Die
 
I'm not going through anything, just wanted to share this for a while, so here you are...

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  • Lily-Arum

    I love the snippets of dialogue you've used at the start, it builds a frenzied emotion really well! Your poetry is all well-written :)


    about 3 years ago