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Written By: Audrey
December 7, 2014
The sun was beating down upon any skin I had been foolish enough to leave exposed. Good clothing and protection was scarce, but water was even more so. My parched tongue knew that, just like my stomach knew it wouldn't be eating anytime soon though still it moaned for food. I spied something in off in the distance of this barren wasteland, and my legs burned asI ran to it. It was a satchel filled with nothing but an empty canteen and dust, and it hit me so hard at that moment... the realization that death was finally coming, so I just sat and waited for the end... but that had already come.