RavensInkWrites

United States Minor Outlying Islands

-she/they ???
-bisexual, but like who knows really
-i love stars, bugs, and sad films. one day, i hope to see the aurora borealis :)
-please dont point out that i dont use capitalization in my writing. i know.

Message from Writer

I don't have much to say, but others do so have some nice quotes:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground" -Teddy Roosevelt
"If one dream should fall apart and break into a thousand pieces, never be afraid to pick one of those pieces up and begin again" -Flavia Weedn
"Everything that exists is born for no reason, carries on living through weakness, and dies by accident" -John-Paul Sartre
"There is no great genius without a touch of madness" -Aristotle
"Write drunk; edit sober." -Ernest Hemingway

Flaws

July 24, 2018

FREE WRITING

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I see the world in color
not in black and white

You go out in daytime
and hide away at night

The world we live in isn't perfect
but that's what we see

If you want to see the flaws
just start with you and me

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3 Comments
  • † Skyward Bound †

    Luna Lemon is completely right. I love this! Excellent work!


    about 3 years ago
  • Gabriel Goodwin

    Short but thoughtful~ Love it!


    about 3 years ago
  • Luna Lemon

    This poem flowed beautifully and the message was clear. I LOVED how you wrapped it up, talking directly to the reader and pulling yourself into it. This was a very well-written piece with the rhyme portraying the message wonderfully. Great job:)


    about 3 years ago