Ava Goshe

United States

Girl in Space

July 22, 2018

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 She looked at the ground
Said she's okay
But she knew different
She was drifting away
She needed someone to help her
She needed someone to stay

But she's floating alone in space
 Praying they will find her
Have they forgotten?
She's not sure
"It's very cold in space," She says,
"Burrr"

Earth is just a speck in the sky
Like a particle of dust
That keeps getting farther away
Get back there one day, she must
But for now, she's just floating
Taking in the scene and counting the stars 
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