Peer Review by Ellie! (United States)

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Gray feelings

By: RavensInkWrites


FREE WRITING

I am sorry if I don't laugh that much,
I don't think I will ever smile again

See when you block out all emotions,
rid all feelings from your head

You also get rid of happiness,
replacing it with gray instead


Peer Review

/You also get rid of happiness, replacing it with gray instead/ because what is there without happiness?


I'm reminded of what happens when people bottle themselves up. When I read this piece and am reminded of that, I picture emotions as color and then everything just fading to gray.


What inspired this piece? Where did it come from? Was it imagination or personal experience?


Reviewer Comments

I think I need to go and have a good cry.