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/You also get rid of happiness, replacing it with gray instead/ because what is there without happiness?
I'm reminded of what happens when people bottle themselves up. When I read this piece and am reminded of that, I picture emotions as color and then everything just fading to gray.
What inspired this piece? Where did it come from? Was it imagination or personal experience?
I think I need to go and have a good cry.