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Okay first, wow! Second, this is a stunning piece of art! I love the way each stanza is written in a different style or rhythm from the one before, but somehow they all work together to make me feel so much. My favorite lines are the ones I highlighted, I feel like they really grip the reader and help tell the story with such realism.
I feel so many emotions really, heartbreak, loss, regret, fear, agony. It felt like I was on a rollercoaster but, instead of going up this one plunged me downwards in a spiral.
Was there a specific event that inspired this piece?
This is an interesting and beautiful piece. At first, it looks rather random and the lines read out of rhythm but as you go deeper into it you can see the story playing out in your head. Awesome job :)h