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This is a really old piece about my previous relationship. Although I am in a new relationship I think that this piece still deserves to be read and its emotions felt.
Every time he laughed, she wanted to hear it again Every time he smiled she knew it was because of her . I relate to this and its so beautiful.
Im speechless honestly. There is nothing I would change. This piece made me appreciate the love I have.
Was this based on an experience you had? If so it sounds magical.
Keep writing <3