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Written By: Gin
July 4, 2018
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I really admire how you were able to take a seemingly out-of-the-blue fact about otters and tie it to your storyline.
besides the explicitly stated "hand-holding" connection, I also feel like the mention of otters gives your piece an open innocence that perfectly suits the relationship between the boy and girl: mutual feelings of affection, but each completely clueless of the other's feelings. as some might say, it is the naivete of childhood love.
though this poem is not long by any means, I think it's all the more effective for its brevity. I feel like you found exactly which words you needed to outline your central theme, and those pairings of different ideas/words have a tremendous impact despite their simplicity.
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