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Saman

United States

Hello! I'm Sam, a young teen writer. I am a complete bookworm and aspiring wordsmith of all sorts. Criticism is always welcome!

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Sugar-Coated Glass

July 1, 2018

PROMPT: Where I'm From

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I am from the Town of Glass
Light, Beautiful
The sun dances on the sidewalk under running children's feet,
The birds twitter in the trees and carefully watch for small treats,
There's a solid warmth that has settled, for now,
And it is calm,
A picture of peace.

I am from the Town of Glass
Sharp, Precise
Every edge has been cut for a purpose,
Every angle predetermined,
Every person made to be perfect,
Like sculptures
Lining the streets.

I am from the Town of Glass
And the light is refracted and reflected until there are a dozen different perspectives of one object,
Each so vastly different that no one can tell that everyone is looking at the same thing.

This town is a paradox
An endless back-and-forth
It is both a prison and a palace,
A place of boredom and entertainment,
A place of sweetness that can make you smile
And a place of sharp edges of expectation that cause children to weep.

This Town of Glass
Is beautifully terrifying.
Like sugar-coated shards,
It is sweet and sparkling,
But can cut quick and deep
Right to the bone.

As it grows
I can only hope
That time will fade the edges that drive people away,
And leave behind the glittering lights that make this place worth loving.

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3 Comments
  • AbigailSauble

    Again, your poetic style is amazing. :)


    about 1 year ago
  • Saman

    Catlover yeah, I totally know what you mean!


    about 1 year ago
  • Catlover

    This scared me if I'm being honest, but the good scared.
    *Five minutes later*
    Does that make sense?


    over 1 year ago