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Message to Readers
Please tell me if there's anything I could change.
"I'm from love— I'm from pleasure— I'm from many tries" wow, that's beautiful. It's heart-touching.
I really loved and appreciated the acknowledgement of how you were born. Through tries and tries and through tears and heartache, and finally after all your parents did, they got you. It's absolutely beautiful and touching.
Sincerely, I really loved this piece. It was sad and sweet, twisting those two together to make a gorgeous, heart-warming piece. Great job! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your writing!