JediKnightGirl

United States

15 y/o
Bi, she/her
Hopeless romantic, fangirl, feminist, anxiety
Hufflepuff, Hamiltrash, & more
Obsessed with Thomas Jefferson
Artist, Writer, Musician, Singer
Love, music, & friendship are everything
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F o u r t e e n _ t i m e s .

June 28, 2018

PROMPT: Subtotals

14
1 me.
2 paths.
3 guitars I've loved.
4 friends that I can't live without.
5 of the worst goodbyes.
6 paintings on the wall.
7 years in love with the same person.
8 grades suffered through.
9 songs scrawled in purple ink.
10 dollars an hour.
11 years a sister.
12 months waiting for a dream to come true.
13 scars on my bleeding heart.
14 times around the sun.

Each more painful than the last.

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4 Comments
  • inkandstars

    Hey! So I saw your comment (thanks for following me), and if you want to learn more bout the mormon religion, don't go by "The Book of Mormon musical". That makes light of or completely disregards our beliefs. But was the music good? I love broadway.


    almost 3 years ago
  • Johanna

    Wow...


    almost 3 years ago
  • LackingASocialLife

    This is my favourite subtotals piece! Like you've stated "14 times around the sun" and yet it still has this poetic manner. It's a twist on the typical "show not tell" vibe schools tell us to work with. I love it!


    about 3 years ago
  • INVISIBL3

    I really like the style in this and the way you can convey emotions through so little words. :)


    about 3 years ago