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PROMPT: Open Prompt
A chilling and scary story that will definitely shock you at the end.
The interaction between the characters. I like how the writer doesn't always use she said, or he said.
Is the narrator male or female?
I love your story. Please keep writing! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧