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“But you will never find, A picture of me, With my flaws, My scars, And imperfections.” These lines were so relatable to me. I have days where looking in the mirror is often the hardest part of the day. To know that other people have felt and feel this way is oddly comforting and conveyed well throughout the poem
Sorrow and a large amount of empathy. I constantly feel this way about myself and often feel alone. The build up to the last few lines makes the pay out of a sort existential loneliness that much more satisfying.
Would you ever publish the poem separately in WtW? I would love to see it as a stand alone piece
Sorry if these reviews seem cut and dry. You really did do a great job but I feel like I’m saying that a lot.