rachbrooke

United States

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Up and Down and Side to Side

June 18, 2018

I think that
perhaps this is the way it is supposed
to be,
with the crazy up and down 
and side to side
and the whycan'tthishappen,
it is all leading up to something
when the up and down will stop
and the silence is no longer deafening 
it will mean that it was not all for naught
and fruition is no longer a myth. 
1- whycan'tthishappen- I love jamming the words into one word, I feel like it packs so much more of a punch. 

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