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Kate | 14 | give me tea, a notebook, and a blanket and I'll be satisfied
Written By: Kate Gardner
June 13, 2018
PROMPT: Five Beginnings
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I really quite like these! They sound like the beginnings to exactly the sort of books I enjoy reading. "a thousand open doors" is poetic and mysterious. "nocturnal sea" is a lovely phrase. The third one is just nice; it sounds like a bedtime or campfire story, and I already wanna meet the shopkeeper mentioned in the fourth. The fifth, though, I think could use some sprucing up? Perhaps say something about why this person is walking down a road? Or maybe s/he is running?
But lovely job. You should do a short story based off one of these and post it. Or better yet, all of them! :)
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