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I really like the way the place is described, because you really state what a child would see. That makes it really powerful, great job!
I think I like the line "A maze". It's simple, but it shows how a child can feel when confronted with the adult world.
I think I would like to know more about the father and his relationship with the child.
Beautiful piece, I really loved it. I love the way it is formulated and the story is really powerful too. Amazing work :)