Peer Review by averageteenwriter (United States)

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Pearl blush

By: Halfeti Rose


PROMPT: Paint Swatch

The beauty of a thousand stars twinkling in the dark night, Some fading Some so bright. The various colours of joy blind to the naked eye. Dancing around like pearls. The Blush of a Pearl.


Peer Review

I really appreciated how he stuck with the idea of luster, and accordingly, directed his imagery in that channel.


I'd slather a child's hospital room with it so they could have company at night if they felt frightened or the pain hurt too badly to sleep.


Reviewer Comments

I look forward to your future work! Keep on writing!