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I can't wait to read all the other responses to this prompt! Feedback is encouraged. :)
I love how this author used such creative vocabulary to make constantly poignant images.
I would slather it on a public wall in a place surrounded by sandy deserts so I could open up a new pathway for their dreams to consider.
Keep on writing! I really enjoyed your piece!