Peer Review by averageteenwriter (United States)

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Orchard Frost

By: JediKnightGirl

PROMPT: Paint Swatch

Orchard frost is the color of barren trees dusted with snow; of fruit that tastes sweet and tart on your tongue with juice that runs down your chin; of the soft and worn fleece jackets you wear while watching snowflakes fade away on your mittens.

Message to Readers

I can't wait to read all the other responses to this prompt! Feedback is encouraged. :)

Peer Review

I love how this author used such creative vocabulary to make constantly poignant images.

I would slather it on a public wall in a place surrounded by sandy deserts so I could open up a new pathway for their dreams to consider.

Reviewer Comments

Keep on writing! I really enjoyed your piece!