Peer Review by averageteenwriter (United States)

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Snake Scale

By: Oscar_Locke

PROMPT: Paint Swatch

It slithers across a page; purple and violet, iridescent like dragonfly wings. It steams in the sunlight, churning through the overturned earth. Snake scale. The same shade of my fingernails as they were crushed by a car door. The same shade of your lips as they squeezed against mine. 

Bitter and beautiful.

Snake scale.

Peer Review

I love how the author brings in memories of the character/their life to create a bigger influence.

I would flip it onto the streets most known for drugs to warn them of danger.

Reviewer Comments

Keep writing! I look forward to your next piece!