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The descriptions and word choice were amazing, and the fact that she was drowning gave me a sense of urgency.
Not particularly? Although, I wasn't really *confused* per se, but I can't help but wonder why that guy murdered her family.
Oh, man... This is absolutely incredible. These descriptions and imagery are phenomenal. I love this so much.
This was a review of the MyFormOfWriting Competition way back when, sorry it took me so long to review!