CreativeAngel

United States of America

I love writing. Writing can express feelings in many different ways. We can share what we wish without speaking.
Writing is.. Creative. It allows imagination.
Express yourself however you can..

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Still I Fall

May 29, 2018

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You can give me all the encouragement you want,
The bitter lies believed you call,
The hundreds of fails i have received,
But still, like teardrops, i'll fall.

Does my failure make you happy?
Why do you insist the stupidity?
Is it because of the pain it takes to speak,
For goodness sake this isn't humanity.

Just like disasters and like death,
The berserk of the fire,
The failure yet to be hidden,
Still i'll fall.

Do you want to see my leftover pieces?
Torn apart and thrown away?
Thoughts piled like dirt,
Without any words for me to say.

Does my misery make you happy?
How cruel the world can be,
If I were stranded,
I would be left at sea.

You may give me your false lies,
Unable to see my self brawl,
You can murder me with your success,
But still, like rain, I'll fall.

Does my pain excite you?
Does it give your life fullness,
That my heart tears into two,
When my life is stuck in dullness?

The pain given from false lies,
I fall.
The ruthless and hurtful cries,
I fall.
I am like dirt stepped on for life,
Not given an care as a grab the knife.

Leaping into the darkness so cold,
I fall.
Being removed just like the growing mold,
I fall.
Crushing all hope that ever formed,
Shadows pitch-black and stormed.
I fall,
I fall,
I fall.
So our history assessment had the poem "Still I Rise" and i took that to create this. And this can apply to me if i want as well so yeah. This horrible btw.

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12 Comments
  • CreativeAngel

    THANK YOU<3


    about 1 year ago
  • Kitty Cheshire

    I'm going to have to agree with everyone. This was really good!!!! And I feel like I can really relate to this. Good job and Keep up the good work!!!!!!!


    over 1 year ago
  • CreativeAngel

    YES


    over 1 year ago
  • CreativeAngel

    TTTRRRUUUEEE


    over 1 year ago
  • CreativeAngel

    VERY


    over 1 year ago
  • CreativeAngel

    YES


    over 1 year ago
  • camlily

    NOT


    over 1 year ago
  • camlily

    TRUE


    over 1 year ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Not as good as you though ;D


    over 1 year ago
  • camlily

    This is amazing!! Omg I think this is your best piece I love it so much!!!


    over 1 year ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Thank You SOOOO Much!!!
    <<<333


    over 1 year ago
  • omicron7889

    This is actually really good, and the repetition of the phrase "I fall" makes it just that much more poignant!


    over 1 year ago