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tear me apart famalams
The sentimentality :')
Her family's dissociation, how that was sort of the result of the type of food they consume.
Her past, the flashback to when she was five was nice, would be curious to know more about its significance to her.
Some people wouldn't know what CCA (co-curricular activity) is.
Be less self-deprecating <3
Much emote, very immigrants, so dumpling.