Peer Review by LyraLynne (United States)

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Snow Clouds

By: Paperbird


PROMPT: The Limerick

Snow never falls from the white cotton clouds–––
It drifts seamlessly from much grayer crowds
Splashing and dotting like rain;
White flecks finer than grain
So endlessly perfect, heavens allowed.
 


Message to Readers

My first limerick. Still new to these kinds of poems so feedback is always appreciated!


Peer Review

The word choice was wonderful. :) It is beautiful imagery that's playful and bounces on your mind when you read it. Awesome!


Reviewer Comments

It was great! The only thing I'd say though, is that you might want to work on syllables. The poem is a little clunky and can come off as slow-moving. Overall, wonderful!