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My first limerick. Still new to these kinds of poems so feedback is always appreciated!
The word choice was wonderful. :) It is beautiful imagery that's playful and bounces on your mind when you read it. Awesome!
It was great! The only thing I'd say though, is that you might want to work on syllables. The poem is a little clunky and can come off as slow-moving. Overall, wonderful!